@comicalmayhem – I hope the scene below can help you in some way. If not, I may be out of my own league. Yep.
…from A Liquid Circus, a developing screenplay of mine…
MIRA comes into the kitchen and see’s MICHAEL sitting at the counter STARING at his glass of wine.
MIRA
(chuckling at Michael)
Guess what, I have two tickets to see the Circus Rockers tonight at the Palace Theater.
MIRA notices some green apples in the chrome basket on the counter and starts juggling two of them.
MICHAEL
(smirking up at MIRA)
Hmm. Well, I suppose we better get ready and put on our clown suits then, huh?
MIRA sits down next to him and picks up his glass of wine.
MIRA
Your crazy. What do we have here, huh?
MIRA takes a sip of the drink.
MICHAEL
(softly heralding at Mira)
A liquid circus.
Wryter’s Note: I wouldn’t mind some direct and interesting feedback about this scene, as well. Yep. Be Good.