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What is wrong with this sentence?

Asked by Dutchess_III (46815points) March 27th, 2013
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“Jody Mangue wrote that her son, Evan Ebel, adored animals and walked up to the mentally ill in restaurants to engage them in conversation.”

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I hope you giggle for a moment before you answer this question!

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livelaughlove21's avatar

Are we looking for a grammatical error, hence the tag? Other than the implication that the mentally ill are animals, I see no errors in sentence structure.

Dutchess_III's avatar

Thank you! “Mentally ill animals in restaurants.” Exactly!

livelaughlove21's avatar

@Dutchess_III Oh yay, I got it. :)

gailcalled's avatar

It’s a non-sequitur, folks, but grammatically correct.

Yeahright's avatar

@Dutchess_III I didn’t giggle :( I always take stuff too seriously…

It doesn’t seem so ambiguous to me because she is dealing with two ideas in two different clauses joined by the conjunction and. Each clause deals with a different idea but both clauses intend to illustrate the fact that he was a compassionate individual. Also, animals are not usually labelled as mentally ill, they don’t go to restaurants, and they don’t engage in conversations.

rebbel's avatar

Evan does not have the same surname as his mentally ill mother?

Berserker's avatar

So some dude killed some people after his sister died, and I’m supposed to giggle? Maniacs, all of you!

Dutchess_III's avatar

I just draw pictures in my head as I read, I guess…and that sentence caused me to…see something strange, so I erased and and started over.

@Symbeline :(

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