“What is your take on this”
The kerning between the large and small letters should be tightened. Too many type embellishments… italicize, serif, all caps reveals a tyro designer trying too hard. Add to that the additional embellishments of rounded corners, pin stripe… too many effects clashing.
The lines around “Herrman are too thick, and the justification is way off from both ends.
Consider putting Herrman Realty on one line smaller type that reads well for envelope and web banner. Current design is far too tall for that.
Consider using a sans serif font. Try Helvetica Neue, or spice it up a little with Optima. Both very classic.
The color scheme will be popular in the fall. Especially around Halloween. Perhaps consider a less dramatic theme that will read well on white paper.