@TheSpiderWeb if you have questions about how to annotate, or strategies for annotation, etc., I’m sure there are people on Fluther who would be very happy to provide some ideas. I’m not sure anyone’s going to simply annotate the passage, though—at least, not without more of an explanation why.
Fluther has a policy about homework questions that is more or less what people have said—you can always ask for help understanding a homework problem (and we are quite happy to help!) but people won’t simply give answers.