I’m currently taking English Classes in college and my most recent assignment is to write a argumentative essay about a controversial topic. I chose to write about how the murder of George Floyd was because of police racism. I need feedback on my thesis statement which is ” The murder of George Floyd was motivated by police racism ”. I went to an alternative school that had a terrible curriculum. I’m very much struggling with this. I’ve asked my professor if it was too late to change topics and she hasn’t responded yet but I assume that it is because I’ve already submitted one assignment that is like the first stage. Can anyone help?

Topics: school, English, essays, police racism, controversial issues