I am wondering if my thesis statement sound solid?
I am doing a research paper on child’s obesity. my goal is to persuade the adults around the child to pay attention to child’s health.
Thesis statement: Due to child’s feeble mind, adults are responsible for child’s heath, they should guide the child to proper diet and physical activies.
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