Here’s a poem i took 5 minutes to write about horses (with which i have an eternal attatchment) And i’d like to know what you think:

Sometimes I can remember your warm fuzz under my fingers.
The soft nicker and gentle snorts you make.
The soundless nuzzling we did when we met.
The musty smell of your damp fur.
But your stable seems so far away now, and I’m starting to forget.
Why can’t we be together anymore?
I thought love broke all boundaries…
But mum says we just can’t keep looking after you, and no matter how hard I beg she just won’t listen.
I wanted to be with you forever. You were my closest friend, and I could tell you anything when we were together.
I always felt so much stronger when I was with you. We faced the world bravely, ready for anything.
I want to be with you again. I want to see you run freely in your field. I want to run, too.

I promise I’ll find you again, friend.
I’ll search until my bones ache and my hands are sore.
For a bond like no other
Is a girl and her horse.

Whaddaya think? Plus i’d appreciate any tips on how i can improve my writing =]

P.S. This was posted before a while ago, but removed because the title was not specific. Sorry ^^ .